This is a good grid but here comes the but. There are too many crossovers. Keep going . You have done good stuff.
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I didn't really feel that ,toast. Thought it was great!

Enjoyed it. What's gorilla a homophone for though? Am I being dumb? Also, take toast's point, presumably you could also have a correct solution where doe and sew can be swapped round.

Guerrilla

I was hitchhiking with a pal in France long ago. He asked someone "ou est la guerre la plus proche". Probably got sent to Vietnam. I spoke better French and went to the railway station . Don't hitch in France - long story but some of them were great so not anti French at all.

I liked it

We don't all have middleclass English accents